Abigail Pomeroy

[Abigail]

[Abigail Pomeroy]
At the end of the day you're another day colder,
And the shirt on your back doesn't keep out the chill.
And the righteous hurry past,
They don't hear the little ones crying.
And the winter is coming on fast, ready to kill.
One day nearer to dying…

Age
Seventeen

Gender

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Female.

Sexuality[/color]
Heterosexual.

Place of Birth[/color]
Évreux, France

Occupation[/color]
Os agent: Espionage.[/blockquote]

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Personality Evaluation

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• Pessimistic
  
• Rude
  
• Hard-shelled
  
• Emotional
  
• Disobedient
  

• Intelligent
  
• Observant
  
• Considerate
  
• Loyal
  
• Helpful
  

Quirks and Habits![/color]
Abigail flinches from touch. She has a tendency to sing underneath her breath when she thinks herself alone.

Family[/color]
Her parents died when she was younger, and, as an only child was left alone. None of her elderly family survived the war, and she never met any cousins she might board with. She is, for all intents and purposes, alone in the world.

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Fighting Experience[/color]
She has no great desire to fight, nor any skill in it, but she is capable. Living on the streets means having no defined style, and that cheating is only cheating if you’re the one hit below the belt.

General Apperance[/color]
She has brown hair just to her shoulders, with green eyes. She is approximately 5’4”, and has a slender body-type.
She wears soft levi’s that match her denim jacket, and an over-sized yellow t-shirt underneath said jacket. Around her neck she has many black cords, that look like a necklace, but could easily turn into a tool for choking someone from behind. Unlike the picture, no jewel dangles from these cords.

Weapons and Possessions[/color]
She has a small blade, something like a thin dagger kept sheathed in her belt, and, along with that, her cord that is approximately a half-inch thick for strangling or for use in fettering a prisoner.

Face Claim![/color]
[ Bifronte ~ Kugaitoukitan ~] -- [Wakana Amaya] -- [[b]Abigail Pomeroy[/b]]

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[Sarrie]

PLEASE REVISE!

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It's a good start. There are just a few things that bother me. For one, her age. Yes we have teenagers working for Os but that is not the reason why her age concerns me. It's the alcoholic part that bothers me. Yes, I know the drinking age in France and yes I know some teenagers are alcoholics but a spy and an alcoholic? Doesn't seem like a good mix to be honest nor a very believable one. All in all, she needs to be fleshed out more in personality and in appearance. When these changes have been made please pm an admin.[/center]

[Abigail]

She officially has no addictions.