Post by Zaine Hunt on Dec 14, 2009 21:16:38 GMT -8
um a poem I wrote last summer. My sister and her friend adored it, called it cute, made me type it up, and then brought it to school to show all their friends. I um, don't like it, yet think it might be my best work. So enjoy? I would greatly like you guys to destroy with harsh words aka criticism.
I don't need you
How can you say
That my poetry is the worst thing in the world?
That I would never get anywhere in life?
That I should just give up,
Go back and be a wife?
What gives you the right,
To mock and laugh,
To put down,
To overall kill
Any hopes and dreams I’ve had?
Yeah I know,
I’m not the best,
I’m not the prettiest,
My words don’t always match,
I tend to make mistakes,
I’ve ran into walls,
I’ve done stupid things.
Yeah I know all that.
But, I don’t
Need to be degraded,
Need to be looked down upon,
Have to feel weak or misguided,
I don’t need any of that.
And frankly, I don’t need you.
